Saturday, December 11, 2010

Hw #21 Comments

Matt
    I enjoyed reading your post Matt. I thought it was very creative and insightful that you included a poem relating to your ideas. In my opinion the most insightful section of your blogpost was your connection to "movies". Movies are supposed to portray our society's reality.You stated that " I think we all wish death and illness was as easy as it is in the movies." I believe that ultimately you want to come to the conclusion that they "soften" and alter reality. 

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