Chris: I enjoyed reading your post. The main point of your post was the difference between home births and hospital births. I valued the part of your post when you asked the question; How was it when you had hospital birth? I valued this because the clear and the amount of depth that was used to answer it. This gave a clear understanding on why woman choose home births. This project matters to me because both hospital births and home births are important to the baby’s health. Which choice is actually the best choice?
I overall thought your post was good but there is a way you might be able to make it better. If you get different point of views besides one point of view you and your readers would have more evidence behind your theory.
Luz: The main point of your post was that baby’s are more significant to our lives then we think they are. They help people understand that the important thing in life is not be selfish and babies help show us that. I valued the pictures you posted, I did because it helped readers get a better understand of what you were talking about. They did because it would help the readers get a personal connection to the post. This project matters to me because people fail to see how important babies are. This post would help remind people why they are extremely significant.
Your post was good but I believe it could have been even better. To make it better would maybe to get other people’s point of view about your topic. By doing this readers get better understand your topic.
Rigel: Rigel your post was great and I enjoyed reading it. It was unique that you talked about the effects of single woman who have to raise their children alone. I thought the section you stated that men lack responsibility today. This is a topic I think you should touch up on in the future. This project is extremely important to me. It is because single mothers do not get as much recognition as they deserve. The baby process with two loving parents is hard enough, I could only imagine the amount of work single mother’s have.
Once again, Rigel I enjoyed reading your post but i think you can touch up on some things. Maybe in the future you would like to have more point of views from single mothers. By doing this people would see why single mothers are not recognized as much as they should be.
Thanks Javon, you're right about that part of my blog not elaborating more about what i meant about men today lacking responsibility, and i regret that, like i told Matt I tried to cram a lot of information and my thoughts in my blog, but I also rushed it a bit. I appreciate your feedback, and have taken it to mind, and will apply your tips to my next blog. Thanks again, and I hope you read my next blog.
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